Everything about this is just mediocre and watching the rest of your stuff makes it kinda apparent that you're struggling to come up with original ideas. Nearly everything you make is based off something popular like Vinesauce or Undertale or YOUTUBE MEMEZ like Big Smoke and We are Number One. You're good at animating, don't get me wrong, but you seem more concerned about having your cartoon associated with something trendy to soften the blow of your subpar writing.
Thank you for your feedback. I actually greatly appreciate someone giving me an honest review. In all honesty this kinda stuff I basically just do for fun. I have no intention of getting any mileage out of it. Just something to do as a hobby sort of. I am actually putting a lot of time into a project that I am hoping to make it have good writing and characters while still having good animation. And yes I am aware my writing isn't the best but I am striving to improve on it. Probably the last "trendy" thing I will basically put out is a Garfielf but it's animated and I am going to try to put out more original content. Thanks for your feedback. I will work on those things that you mentioned and try to improve on those aspects.
I liked the pacing and art style but the animation was really stiff. The backgrounds ranged from okay to average too. Overall it's decent but try and improve on your animation.
This was my first time doing an animation with a variety of backgrounds. I'm not good with backgrounds to begin with, so I appreciate the criticism. May I ask what I could've done to improve the backgrounds?
The animation was mehhhhhhh and the writing felt really lazy.
The animation is good but the writing just flat out sucks and seems like something straight out of an early 2000s Flash cartoon. I'm a new viewer of yours so when I first watched this I was confused and thought it was some kind of inside joke or reference to The Simpsons until I later discovered it was based on a comic you made. If you finished animating the whole entire comic it would've been a little better but it's still apparent that the writing wasn't suited for a stand alone cartoon.
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THIS is how you do a parody right. The animation replicates the Peanuts style perfectly and, oddly enough, it actually kind of feels like a Peanuts episode! Instead of just relying on the "cartoon characters gone violent" gimmick, the tone of a normal Peanuts show is constant throughout this cartoon. This proves that quality independent animation can still be achieved. Amazing work.
I love the animation and sound effects! Voice acting could be a little more clear in a few parts but it's still good
Amazing like The Amazing Spider-Man!
It was pretty good.
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